Monday, November 9, 2020
MEGACITY
This is 1st person narrative of harry the dog and his owner jack the human and I will be the dog
(Day1)I woke up today and my friend is looking tired he gets dressed and wen head out side and we head to our spot on the side of the road I collect all the dropped coins with jacks hat he also get coins dropped by him from huge people with black clothes and huge upside down bowls it was a ok day.
(Day2)Today jack looks happy that makes me happy so we go to out spot again today he keeps smiling while they drop coins by him they bump into him but he do not seem to mind because he keeps smiling in the rain he keeps me happy to.
(Day3)It was very wet outside today and I was very scared of the huge flash of light later it made a huge sound same amount of coins today but the glass jar is almost full my friend jack is very exited i drop the yellow coin in and his face just lights up he puts all his items in a large case and go to bed he goes to sleep very happy with a smile on his face the next day we ride all the way out of the streets I see this unknown thing on the ground it not black or white or yellow my friend goes on it and so do I we play and he gives me a new food i love it and he loves to see me happy and we go to bed in our new home.
Thursday, October 29, 2020
Wednesday, September 23, 2020
Tuesday, September 15, 2020
Monday, September 14, 2020
Bridge to terabithia summary
WALT:summarize the key information in bridge to terabithia
Who:jesse and Leslie
What:becoming friends
Where:in a forest
When:after school
How:creating a tree house
Why:because they were getting bullied
Wednesday, August 26, 2020
Friday, August 21, 2020
Wednesday, June 24, 2020
Tuesday, June 23, 2020
mahinga kai crusader.
WALT:
Possible reading purposes
find out about mahinga hai and what two men are doing to keep it alive
Compare the two approaches to keeping mahina kai alive
Possible writing purposes
Prepare question and interview grandparents or someone in your extended
family about food they collected when they were children
SC:I will
-summarize the main ideas
-identify the differences between the two approaches.
-reflect on which approach I like best.
Friday, June 5, 2020
Monday, April 20, 2020
Friday, April 17, 2020
Thursday, March 19, 2020
Wednesday, March 4, 2020
Friday, February 28, 2020
what it means to be a good friend
What it means to be a good friend
What it means to be a good friend they must be respectful, loyal, honest.A friend is like how people say a dog is man's best friend well it’s his or her best friend because they need friend for companionship.How a farmer needs his dog because that's his friend and every one needs a friend.
1.Firstly.The individual will help their friend in any weather (it an expression).
2.Secondly.A good friend will tell his or her friend that they look sick and won’t spread lies and hate about them.
3.Lastly.They won’t lie or if their friend went around and told everyone his or her secret that was just between them or if it was just embarrassing that part is a bad friend.
In conclusion a good friend is a good person people know that people can trust and will help an individual person who will help and will be loyal.Not spread lies or hate and will help each other.
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Friday, February 21, 2020
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