What it means to be a good friend
What it means to be a good friend they must be respectful, loyal, honest.A friend is like how people say a dog is man's best friend well it’s his or her best friend because they need friend for companionship.How a farmer needs his dog because that's his friend and every one needs a friend.
1.Firstly.The individual will help their friend in any weather (it an expression).
2.Secondly.A good friend will tell his or her friend that they look sick and won’t spread lies and hate about them.
3.Lastly.They won’t lie or if their friend went around and told everyone his or her secret that was just between them or if it was just embarrassing that part is a bad friend.
In conclusion a good friend is a good person people know that people can trust and will help an individual person who will help and will be loyal.Not spread lies or hate and will help each other.
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